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Friday 12 April 2019

I am A Soldier

I can smell the blood from soldiers near me

I can hear running through mud

I can see our enemy on the other side

I can taste the mud ,yuck poo.





3 comments:

  1. Hi Christina, my name is Breeze and I go to Red Hill school. I like your Anzac poem it sounds very yucky and I bet you the soldiers that fought in the army would smell that. So thank you for posting.

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  2. Kia Ora Christina I am working with Victoria. We are from Redhill School.I like your flower and I like the colour of the flower. How can you see the enemy if you are not a real soldier?. I look forward to your next post. Thanks for sharing.

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  3. Hello Christina I'm Victoria from Redhill School. This is the second comment I have made to you. I have a question, Why would you taste a dirty mud?, jokes😁. I look forward to your next post. Thanks for sharing.

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